written by Robert Atkinson
I'd love to get notes and comments on what yall think. Also I still need to learn formatting and all that. Its probably so wrong, bear with me.
This was written as part of a bigger thing, however I think it would be funny as a stand alone short.
I thought this was hilarious, making fake infomercial dialogue .
The concept is retarded and thats why its fun.
At this point I would just like to hear feed back from you all on anything you can comment on to help me get better.